i really didnt like it, sorry
ok well, it looked like you downloaded some charictors, backgrounds, and crappy sound affects, and compiled it all into one big, might i add VERY anoing flash
this thing gave me the worst headache, i mean put a looping music background, not contiuous gunshots, it get really anoing really quickly
i gave you a 2/5 simply because worst crap has slid by
fix the anoing gunshots, put voice acting insted of text boxs, and maybe come up with your own animation, thats all the adivice i can give to you